This is an excerpt from one of my current thriller projects. I don't want to reveal much of the plot just yet. I am curious as to what people think of my writing as it is here now. I am sixteen years old. Please be honest.
The story revolves around newly married couple, Jack and Abigail Rainier, who have just returned from their honeymoon, and are preparing to spend the holidays with Jack's family. When Abigail was twelve, she was forced to witness the attepted suicide of her babysitter, with a…
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Posted on August 21, 2009 at 8:00pm — 1 Comment
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"The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams."
"Do the things you think you cannot do." Both are by Eleanor Roosevelt and I try to make them a part of my life everyday.
Martha
Glad to see you here, and I am very impressed with your love of writing at 16-years old! I wish I had started young like you.
Sincerely,
Lance